Performance Critique: October 6b

A bar show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IYMGnPlFY-c

0m35s Good job acknowledging things

1m00s I forgot to bring up my hand like a gun

1m42s Add in “meet me in the bathroom”

2m08s Go back to saying “baggage check”

3m02s Don’t pause before “shmuck”

3m28s Smile more during this bit, don’t show the pain, haha

3m48s Pronounce “soufflé” properly

5m06s Good new tag

7m16s Start with marketing not neurogasm

8m29s After “you know the one” try saying “he’s like, I do now”

Overall: The A material worked better than the four or five new jokes I did in the middle, but they still got a decent amount of laughs and have potential.

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