Hosting the writer’s mic
httpv://youtu.be/IZW4VOWei2k
1m10s Good change to the joke
1m25s Tighten this list to get to the independent woman callback faster
3m14s The last word should be “payphone”
4m22s Need to tighten that last part
Overall: Ok for a mic. Some of the new punch lines went over decently.