Performance Critique: October 30a

Hosting the writer’s mic

httpv://youtu.be/IZW4VOWei2k

1m10s Good change to the joke

1m25s Tighten this list to get to the independent woman callback faster

3m14s The last word should be “payphone”

4m22s Need to tighten that last part

Overall: Ok for a mic. Some of the new punch lines went over decently.

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