MCing the 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/PLwXrE-BjK8
0m56s Have her look the guy up and down first, then say the line
1m59s Always nice to get an applause break off of crowd work
4m10s The carousel is a new line, think about the best wording for it
5m14s I can definitely dig deeper about the Brooklyn
6m28s Don’t do crazy eyes, do scared eyes
7m08s Weird pause before “bought my plane ticket”
8m07s The save line doesn’t fully make sense here as I got some laughs
Doing time between comics and the check spot
httpv://youtu.be/S93DIquG3zE
0m49s The act out should be more depressed about getting it in your eye
1m56s This has become one of my biggest laughs
3m59s I bailed on part of a joke
5m29s It should be “you just wanna” not “you wanna just”
6m08s Decent improvised line, might want to add that in
8m10s Tell her “happy birthday” before going into my bit
9m19s Good improv on this, might be the way to handle when nobody volunteers a safe word
Overall: Very good MCing set. And the check spot and time between comics went well too.