Performance Critique: October 28a

MCing the 8pm show

httpv://youtu.be/PLwXrE-BjK8

0m56s Have her look the guy up and down first, then say the line

1m59s Always nice to get an applause break off of crowd work

4m10s The carousel is a new line, think about the best wording for it

5m14s I can definitely dig deeper about the Brooklyn

6m28s Don’t do crazy eyes, do scared eyes

7m08s Weird pause before “bought my plane ticket”

8m07s The save line doesn’t fully make sense here as I got some laughs

Doing time between comics and the check spot

httpv://youtu.be/S93DIquG3zE

0m49s The act out should be more depressed about getting it in your eye

1m56s This has become one of my biggest laughs

3m59s I bailed on part of a joke

5m29s It should be “you just wanna” not “you wanna just”

6m08s Decent improvised line, might want to add that in

8m10s Tell her “happy birthday” before going into my bit

9m19s Good improv on this, might be the way to handle when nobody volunteers a safe word

Overall: Very good MCing set. And the check spot and time between comics went well too.

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