Performance Critique: October 27b

A late night music and comedy mic

httpv://youtu.be/2K–ZGOY0h8

1m08s Good hula hoop work this time

1m19s Get lost touching my own face

2m27s Feels too forced, figure out a different way to do this

4m09s Could’ve pointed this out earlier

4m48s Sound more positive about this

4m54s Shift down and sad for “on the only window”

5m10s Third date needs to be different

Overall: Ok for three in the morning, but the new lines need a rewrite

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