Performance Critique: October 27a

An open mic

httpv://youtu.be/4Ur8vGKA84g

0m29s Don’t step on the laugh

0m38s Do better object work: spin the hula hoop at the top first

1m45s The sarcasm should be heavier or change the idea

3m02s Tighten the wording on this

3m48s Sound happier about this, like I’m selling her on it

Overall: Good for a mic, but the 3 or 4 new lines I tried on older jokes didn’t work.

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