An open mic
httpv://youtu.be/4Ur8vGKA84g
0m29s Don’t step on the laugh
0m38s Do better object work: spin the hula hoop at the top first
1m45s The sarcasm should be heavier or change the idea
3m02s Tighten the wording on this
3m48s Sound happier about this, like I’m selling her on it
Overall: Good for a mic, but the 3 or 4 new lines I tried on older jokes didn’t work.