Performance Critique: October 27a

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6XtStFYVVog

0m57s Deliver this while smiling, not while angry

1m44s Try saying “that basically means” instead of just “basically”

2m43s Act out the waitress putting the plate down and saying it

3m03s Finish more of the marriage sentence before interrupting myself

4m20s Try that as an actual line

Overall: Working stuff out at a mic, I might’ve improvised a good line about not knowing the word for non dysfunctional family

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