Performance Critique: October 26

Opening for a sketch comedy show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AiTKjqkAM2A

2m07s Rephrase that better, “I’m glad only one person got that, for the rest of you that means four years of your life weren’t flushed down the toilet”

5m10s I improvised this part, but there’s something in there

5m30s Applause break after twenty awkward seconds, I’ll take it

6m16s Try “clinic” instead of “rally”

7m42s It seems like the jehovah’s model joke is weaker than my other two mom bits

8m09s Pause between “bought them all” and calling out the fork

8m39s Add a bring it

8m42s Try “Sir, have you been telling jokes tonight” and improvise about that more

9m00s Don’t use the word “whore house”

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vmM4FmGQdMo

1m52s I bailed out on the last part of this joke, and that’s the part I wanted to test

Overall: Really good set with two legit applause breaks. I should’ve finished the newer joke towards the end and called out the fork dropping better as it messed up the timing of one of the jokes.

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