Performance Critique: October 24

The writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wEQD6cbulxg

1m47s Instead of “I mean.. what a bargain” try “I know.. what a bargain”

2m02s Stop myself in the middle of the word “jersey”

2m18s Cut the celebrity part of the joke

2m54s Get to the impression quicker

Overall: Working out jokes. The new poster joke has potential.

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