The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B-eQuU2F7TI
1m07s Work on the woman’s voice
3m50s Make “I googled it” sound more like I’m admitting a secret
5m00s Funny interaction
5m20s But that interaction will ruin that punch line, should’ve just jumped to the next part
6m55s The safe word here might be funnier cause it’s more random
7m19s Stronger act out when I say his safe word
8m35s Good line to keep, “back to the sadness”
10m23s Cut out the waiters suicide thought unless I’ve done the wood chipper joke
12m20s Not sure why the callback completely missed
Overall: Good but some lines completely missed.
