The 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vKz912U3u7k
0m25s Should’ve played off him saying “fella” that’s funny
1m08s This was the first time I tried this joke with a real crowd and it actually hit well
2m04s Good improvised line
3m59s Good job waiting for the laugh, it took them an extra second
5m36s Change it from “beatings tripled” to “neglect tripled”
6m59s Add in a “bring it”
7m20s The key is to pause for half a beat after “about”
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2F9rNJbqzAg
0m24s Use the word “suspicious” as well as “weird” in there
1m03s Commit to the “pow pow pow” more
Overall: Real solid set, almost all of the punch lines on the new jokes worked
