Performance Critique: October 21b

Opening for a headliner at a college, about 60 in the audience

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_8iKeiI6x8o

1m43s Do a little more crowd work there, or say another off the cuff line

2m18s Say the “maybe” angrier

3m48s Interesting that this laugh is bigger than “I remember being on the plane”

4m25s Think for an extra second before saying anything

7m11s Add a “no no no” before “I wasn’t gonna buy anything”

9m01s Could’ve done that a little earlier in the set

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wceC4NihPDM

1m07s I need a bombing save line there and I knew not to do the second half of the Netflix joke but then I got greedy

Overall: Very solid set especially considering I went up first without an MC. The second half of the Netflix joke and the voting joke both missed but the other 12 minutes hit real well. I need to work on those two jokes.

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