Performance Critique: October 19

MCing my Queens show for five or six people

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3DlQKnXPxgI

0m08s Make them clap again

1m03s Try “oh sorry John”

1m58s Kill that tag

2m11s Add in “elementary school students”

2m35s Should’ve connected the drug pushing with the Barry Bonds look a like

4m57s I should’ve named another Caribbean island and then added Brooklyn afterwards, like, “are you from Barbados, Brooklyn”

6m20s Say “some pokemon cards” instead of “a pokemon card”

6m45s Add “and we live in three different boroughs”

8m32s Turn in another direction and make it like I’m explaining it to one person before saying “cause she’s instant play”

Overall: The crowd work was okay but my energy was much lower than I should have as an MC. I should also have made them clap at the start to show I was in control.

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