Performance Critique: October 18

Doing a spot two plus hours into the show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eiNwTOkDb0Y

2m06s The save line here wasn’t necessary at all

2m18s Cut the “important things” part

2m55s Cut the “yes we can” tag

3m02s It’s called satire, not sarcasm

3m53s I should find a girl and be like, “she’s giving me a look like, I’ll prove you wrong”

5m01s More emphasis on “never”

Overall: Mediocre. I was overly focused on the new voting joke and wasn’t too in the moment or having enough fun. The voting jokes needs to be tightened, but it has potential.

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