Performance Critique: Oct 17a

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J3DwZvhyKOE

1m17s Rip into him a little more for that

2m21s Figure out a way to change tone even if I’m reading something

4m03s Go more extreme on the poses

4m29s Rephrase to “can’t get enough of Bambi’s mother dying”

5m20s Commit stronger to the face touching

Overall: The new dating bit needs to be significantly cut down. It’s almost five minutes long now, it might be funny when it’s under two minutes.

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