Hosting the writers mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HA-H6yQ6I4g
1m17s Say “way more” instead of “more” and pause after each item I list
1m45s First have her name the position, then the kid name it something else
4m21s Say modern day not normal day
6m37s Be clearer and say “so the mom smiles at me”
Overall: Working out some jokes, the “we’re not friends” seems to have the most potential but I butchered the delivery and punch lines on some of the other ones.
