Hosting the writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cxf4rPJ3w1g
2m57s Don’t improvise the “in touch with my feelings” line before the self aware line
3m44s Cut the elimination parts
5m14s Rewrite #6
Overall: Weak even for hosting a mic. The online profile has potential but needs to be way shorter and a lot punchier
