Performance Critique: October 16a

The 8pm Show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mj-G0VJEihU

3m24s Good job addressing the situation

5m26s Don’t stumble on the punch line

5m29s Pause for an extra second before “neuro war profiteering”

5m59s Stepped on a laugh

Overall: My A material got big laughs and I mumbled a closing punch line on one newer joke and then the voting joke delivery isn’t right yet.

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