Performance Critique: October 15a

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FwT3NDB0uRU

0m26s The way to make that a joke and not a rant is: “You go around thinking, I could upgrade, I should upgrade, I’m single…”

0m57s Say “and” before “bullets”

1m15s Try “walk out” instead of “leave”

1m25s Say “tricep” instead of “wrist”

2m39s Pause after “oh cmon”

3m35s Say “it’s called”

5m14s Be more incredulous in the delivery

Overall: Working out some jokes, the yoga words need changing and I need to improve my delivery on the other newer jokes.

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