Performance Critique: October 13c

Going up around 2am at a music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5lWeVD5dcbY

0m28s Good thing someone was actually from Denmark

1m56s Add “and I started getting lonely too”

2m28s Therapy is fun

2m58s That’s a good improvised line, try to reuse it

5m13s Might be decent to keep, slightly crude though

6m18s Cut this down to “the odds of this working are lower than”

7m12s There might be a better sitcom than “Growing Pains”

7m48s Add “I can take it”

Overall: Good set. The Blade bit went great at the end. The online profile has potential but needs to be tightened.

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