Performance Critique: October 13b

Another mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E1qMrV3OqCw

1m28s I need a better line for when someone doesn’t have a safe word

2m02s Point out that he must really love food

3m10s Might have room to say something else about the photo as an extra laugh

4m24s Emphasize “which” harder

4m35s Don’t say “a” before “pink slip”

5m08s The look on my face when the MC cuts me off is pretty hystiercal

Overall: Good for a mic. I need to figure out stock lines for when the person doesn’t have a safe word. Also, this is the first time I ever got cut off mid joke because I was slightly over time, which was interesting.

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