Performance Critique: October 13a

A feedback mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=348SfzEyd30

3m05s Don’t say “five minutes” twice, just do it at the end of the conversation

4m25s Don’t pause before “cake”

4m33s Add “all the” before “enthusiasm”

6m16s Don’t stumble over the words

6m27s Voice should be a little raspier

6m48s Maybe try “I won’t yell out pink slip”

Overall: Standard weak mic response. Keep working out the newer stuff.

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