A clean set for 4 or 5 audience members
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nofFD3jh4GY
0m49s Add in “so” before “I signed up”
4m25s Sell the “ugh mom” better
4m59s Pause after “and” before the “to see my mother cry”
5m50s I should look in one direction for my entire response to the guy
6m55s “BS” isn’t nearly as funny as “bullshit” because the T is a hard consonant, but it was a clean show
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jYG0wMjBzBE
0m14s Be overly happy for the whole neglect bit
0m43s Pause for an extra half second before doing the watch check
Overall: Not great but not horrible. I was able to do 12 clean minutes and got some laughs from the tiny audience.
