A show in the back of a record store
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CkemXDOKVn8
0m48s Do an online dating joke if I’m going to ask them about that
2m17s Pause another half second before “maybe”
5m26s Deliver the line more surprised instead of angry
6m34s I might want to make that part of the joke
6m48s Work with that comment more. Don’t be afraid to jump out of material to mess around.
7m40s Doing the ruin your credit history line before the “cool nerd” bit doesn’t really make sense
8m22s Pick one person to be republican even if everyone laughs
9m12s Don’t stumble on the punch line
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BDFGXpXNmAw
0m07s Instead of “you’re all…” try “you guys are”… it’s less accusatory
0m44s Don’t point at my head for “neuro”
1m25s Throw in the “twenty dollars” callback
2m14s If I do these two jokes back to back, I should say, “the first time I had sex with this office girl, she was like…”
Overall: Solid set and solid laughs throughout but I should’ve played with the crowd more especially because they were giving me some funny nuggets that I really could’ve run with.
