Performance Critique: November 27

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6q4R2xuQSS4

3m59s This punch line is closer to where it should be, but it’s not fully right yet

5m45s I should try doing this as a self realization, “I just realized it’s cheaper for a back alley bj than for an impression of my mom” or something like that

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OCEiDH27r0c

2m27s I just rewrote this punch line a few days ago, nice to see it working right away

4m19s Hit “I start to believe them” harder

4m28s The checks just got dropped mid-joke

5m44s A save line here could’ve helped

6m21s Add in “he’s like, don’t blame me, I only interrupted you” or something like that

Overall: Great 17 minute set and I was even able to keep most of the audience’s attention during the start of check dropping.

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