The 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/rhmlbSTBLf8
1m02s A couple of college kids had seen perform me a bunch of times before
1m41s Try pausing for half a second before “disappointdar”
2m35s Didn’t need to address it a second time yet, at least on the video it doesn’t seem like them chiming in interrupted my flow as much as it felt at the time
5m00s The eyes don’t need to scan as quickly
6m10s It was an all Asian table
7m28s Hit “child abandonment” harder
8m10s I skipped a line about “you should make more compromises”
8m48s If someone doesn’t contribute a safe word, ask someone else. If two don’t, share mine then designate someone. The order was wrong here.
10m34s Cut the unconditional love line
12m26s Add “I’m like” before saying something
13m47s Nice little crowd interaction
13m53s Stretch out the girl’s voice on the syllables more
Part 2
httpv://youtu.be/5xxYR9ErAbw
1m12s Nice improvised callback
1m27s I could’ve added “especially those ten back there”
4m41s More emphasis on “animal”
5m44s I forgot “of sadness” and then to do “our cycles are in sync”
6m20s It’s not clear she’s holding a martini glass, play with my hair instead
Overall: Considering how much people saying my punch lines at the start threw me off mentally, I did well. I got laughs throughout this longer set and ended strong.
