An open mic with an actual audience
httpv://youtu.be/pGMV3UQr0E0
0m53s If I say something after the setup that isn’t the punch line, repeat the setup real quick
2m35s Don’t say “life’s tough” before “welcome to life”
2m51s My hand should be out by my chest for that voice
3m17s More emphasis on “deserve”
3m49s Instead of “and it has a” say “with a”
4m42s The save lines hit harder than any other lines during the bit
Overall: Decent set, the occupy wall street material is getting good laughs, but the biggest laughs are the save lines where I acknowledge I’m ranting and losing everyone. Work on getting the actual lines funny without the saves.
