Performance Critique: November 20a

The writer’s mic

httpv://youtu.be/qai0xDdaIJw

2m44s Cut the Gandhi line

4m05s Basement line is good

4m38s Try to figure out a way to make this part of the bit

5m08s Tighten this line and make an actual punch line

Overall: Decent response for a mic. Keep working on that new immigrant wall street bit.

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