Performance Critique: November 17

Going up at like 2am at a music and comedy mic

httpv://youtu.be/jIof44LcI28

2m55s Cut the disqualified for not being born here line and the Obama line

5m20s The addition of the gas and friend isn’t needed here

8m10s Should’ve done the eye line at the start of this bit

8m20s Cut the DMV line

8m48s The sentence should be flipped, half a face goes at the end of it

10m37s Say “kitchen” without “sink”

10m44s Last line should’ve been “I don’t know where the fourth head went either”

Overall: Ok for two in the morning.

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