Performance Critique: May 8a

Saturday afternoon open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ff7QZA0stMw

0m21s Change “your” to “our”

2m19s Get rid of the seconds part

3m54s It should be “in the market” not “on the market”

Overall: Working out newer jokes, there wasn’t much response at this mic, but I can still see what parts can be fixed

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