Performance Critique: May 7b

Going up 2.5+ hours into the show

httpv://youtu.be/aMIN79EvaJE

1m43s I could do better than “curl up in ball” but the rhyme idea is on

2m29s Get rid of “I feel that” just go right into it

2m40s Try to deliver it without the anger/frustration, but more playful

3m40s Get the first syllable of “global” going first

4m01s Rewrite the one room part

4m24s Find a better ending for self entitled, the self referential isn’t doing it

4m51s Pause before “and so is my sister”

Overall: Strong start, then I did a new joke that needs work

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