Performance Critique: May 3

Late night at a comedy and music mic, after a six minute intro

httpv://youtu.be/3Gfr_pelJKE

4m39s The camp one is weak, cut it

5m13s I can start the “glo” sound before interrupting

6m10s Cut the American dream part

6m54s The tickets to America is weak, cut it

8m03s Cut the fired at line

Overall: Really good set and good job taking my time to ease into material.

Verified by ExactMetrics