Hosting the writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rb8HSZoaFVU
4m01s Wipe the lipstick in a more natural motion
5m03s Rephrase to “and already breadline worse than conga line”
5m34s Cut “I did”
5m56s Pivot around the room as the mom character for another second or two
6m39s Pause after “they do”
Overall: Eh. I mostly worked out older bits that I’ve reworded.
