This was my big leaving DC show, so there was an actual audience of like fifteen people.
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CyOPhJjdaNA
1m43s Missed saying “if you do that” before “then you got huge tubes”
1m56s Not sure what the person said
2m13s Look at the person who didn’t get the dog a gift when I say “most people love their dogs”
2m55s I’m surprised that still got laughs after the guy’s response
4m36s First time this punch line got the laughs it deserved
6m07s Great improved comment
6m49s I talked over laughs right there, slow it down
7m35s There was no need for a “if someone doesn’t laugh” line right there
8m14s Another spot where I didn’t need a “if someone doesn’t laugh” lin
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Of8hTlhozPY
0m07s I lied
0m42s It should’ve been “half eaten bagel”
0m55s I didn’t make the right facial reaction
1m47s I need to put the emphasis on “YOU” and use “kidnap” instead of “abduct”
Overall: This is me doing 12 minutes in front of a decent sized crowd. Looking at the tape a month later, it was a pretty good set. However, at the time I felt I didn’t do that well. Good thing I tape everything.
(Random note: At the end of this show, since it was my last time in DC, I was roasted by the other comics. Unfortunately, I only recorded that on my phone and my phone was replaced before I could upload it…But there were gems like “you’re the reason abortions should be legal”)
