A writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IRwaB4Aivx4
0m27s Try a different sound for the radar
0m42s Do the beeping sound at myself
4m26s Change it to “I can’t marry you”
5m07s The joke needs an end
5m24s Cut “I did”
5m49s Do a better lipstick fixing motion
Overall: Good for a mic. Act outs could be stronger.
