Performance Critique: May 26b

Late night music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BM-XHZ_xRPY

0m39s Good analogy, too bad I can’t recycle it

7m18s Rephrase to “I can’t marry you”

8m04s Cut the “when sixteen” line

8m34s Cut “I did”

8m58s Rephrase to “is my lipstick smeared?”

10m04s Good riff

10m52s Make a more obvious check mark motion

12m45s Say “the glow” instead of “a bit of glow”

Overall: Weaker than usual here, but I had some good improvised lines.

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