Performance Critique: May 22a

Hosting the writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K7-AYUFeqYE

0m57s Before the act out say “that’s like walking into the office like”

1m44s Wipe lips after the lipstick line

2m39s Cut this joke

2m53s Lean into the character quicker and more aggressively

4m53s The mom character should always hold the mic stand with her left hand

Overall: Mostly tried out newer stuff and most of it needs rework or to be cut.

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