Performance Critique: May 20

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5Q8ekcnEQQo

0m35s Do a bigger hand motion and for a little longer

1m07s Change “whatever” to “it’s okay” to mirror the first part of the joke

2m39s Explain the analogy before doing the act out

4m00s Point as I say the line

5m51s Nice honest moment

5m54s And then an improvised tag

6m45s Don’t point for that long

7m06s That’s a good add on

8m18s Say “Jesus can’t help you, he’s too busy with ripsaws”

Overall: Good but not great, a bunch of tags need work.

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