Performance Critique: May 20b

A late night music and comedy show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TUqjh6hmdCY

0m23s That’s a funny follow up, I think I came up with it on the spot

3m18s This needs a stronger ending

5m59s Maybe I should keep this joke after all?

6m37s Or just keep those first two lines of the joke..

8m31s Say this punch line stronger and more confidently

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fCkDom7MebQ

Overall: The newer material is working but it needs a stronger ending

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