Performance Critique: May 1c

A check spot on the 9pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7bKBZ925u_g

0m55s It should be “about my kid” not “for my kid”

2m12s Address it better, like I have in previous sets

2m31s Change “comedian” to “comic”

5m15s I can tighten that premise into a lot less words

Overall: Decent response for a check spot.

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