A check spot on the 9pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7bKBZ925u_g
0m55s It should be “about my kid” not “for my kid”
2m12s Address it better, like I have in previous sets
2m31s Change “comedian” to “comic”
5m15s I can tighten that premise into a lot less words
Overall: Decent response for a check spot.