Performance Critique: May 1a

A writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c5to_wojwbk

1m18s Cut the promoting line

1m48s The new crazy voice

3m05s Good job being in the moment

4m15s Don’t say the uncomfortable line after a big laugh

4m33s The follow home line should be in a crazy voice

Overall: Good for a mic

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