A writer’s mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IsdrpI_rRFg
1m52s Funny response while in act out character
2m10s Change from pointing motion to something else
2m42s Transition is very jarring, figure out a different way to introduce it
5m40s Rephrase to “what’s wrong? Is my lipstick smeared?” and then wipe my mouth
5m56s The “twelve minutes” should be at the start of the sentence
Overall: First joke went well the rest was mediocre.
