Performance Critique: May 19b

A small show in a basement of a restaurant

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dTBgD7itW-w

1m51s Say “when you throw it” before “the screen breaks”

3m40s No need to say “he literally took of his shoes”

6m42s Start this joke with emphasizing each word, instead of starting it at the third time

8m38s The sand joke is starting to get laughs in more places

Overall: I did mostly newer jokes in front of something resembling an audience and they mostly went over well

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