Performance Critique: May 19a

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fpGJSxu1Eoo

1m10s I need to think of a way to ask so many questions in a row without it seeming weird

1m31s Get rid of ice cream trucks

2m33s Make the Mercedes line less wordy

3m40s Cut this whole joke

4m03s Say “radar” not “detector”

4m18s Flap my arms once per time that the homeless character talks

5m34s Needs a stronger ending

Overall: Working out newer material, some of it’s better than others

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