A bar show for about 8 people
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VesRi8TKwSI
1m20s Rephrase sentence to “I have a friend Blade, who also wants to do stand up but he can’t because…”
3m40s Point with one hand, not two
4m38s Don’t introduce him again, just go into his physicality
6m23s I could’ve made the transition a little smoother with “my favorite website is also related to movies”
7m06s That’s the wrong laugh for that character
7m43s Find a better way to get this across
Overall: Ok for a small show. I need to find a better way to phrase some things.
