Doing my show in Queens
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6kZPvnt1KOY
1m37s Say “truck” not “van” cause I already said van earlier
4m29s Get rid of the fluctuating god bit
6m16s I’m talking faster than usual cause it’s the only chance to get bar people to pay attention
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xG0aqYb8mKA
1m24s My girl voice needs to stay the same throughout
3m05s If I call that out, I should start doing another joke, not force my way back into this one
4m02s Good little improv line
7m01s This joke needs a different ending
Overall: I powered through a noisy bar set
