Performance Critique: May 17

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LMWt02im7RE

0m18s I missed the word “van”

0m57s Don’t pause after “contract”

1m34s Kill “kid trucks”

2m08s Rephrase to “ohh, yeah, Cats, the musical”

2m59s Think of something better than Gucci dress

3m59s I don’t like the fluctuating god joke

5m11s I need to get to the “less liquid” part sooner

6m07s Play up each of the grains of sand more

Overall: The mobile adoption center needs to be tightened, I can get rid of the fluctuating belief in god and the sand bit still needs to be figured out

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