Performance Critique: May 17a

Doing a spot on my Queens show for six people

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pjGQzMhUTSI

1m45s Instead of “jokes he wrote” say “some of his act for him”

2m18s If I’m gonna do the head shaking, it has to always be shaking, never stopping

2m58s Good job picking up on it and going with it

4m52s Add “because” in front of “those people have class”

5m05s Just go back into him without setting it up

7m00s Do a better drunk impression and set it up clearer

7m43s Mom should hold the mic stand with one hand

9m32s Good call back to previous crowd work

10m48s There’s a stronger way to do this

Overall: Good for six people there, could’ve ended stronger. I stayed in the moment and did a bunch of crowd interaction.

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