MCing the Sunday Writers Mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8RmbvK2TI7g
0m20s Slow down and sound more confused
0m32s Reword to “van full of kids”
0m41s Slow down!
0m51s Get rid of the bike messenger part
1m18s Kill international part
1m38s Kill the king cone part
2m20s Say “when you got singing kids with cell phones” instead
Overall: I worked out one new joke and can already see which parts need to go, I need to slow WAY down on this joke though and play up my confusion
