Performance Critique: May 15b

The Saturday night show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8nvhvcnljxM

0m10s Stop calling out the bad claps, or figure out a funnier way to do it

1m18s Turn my head to another part of the room before saying “in the first hour”

4m06s First laugh of the sand joke, forty seconds in, that’s too long before a laugh

4m16s Do three pictures, not four

4m31s Second laugh, took another 25 seconds

5m31s That got a good response, but it was too long between laughs

5m50s Cut the seconds part

6m08s A fourth laugh in 2.5 minutes, this joke needs serious tightening

6m10s Brought them back

7m19s Don’t do the “table 2” cough

8m28s Cut the eucharist

8m59s Get rid of “for a pamphlet”

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XErFmJjoPhU

1m09s Take a more thoughtful pause

Overall: The old stuff worked well and I can now see where the photo joke needs tightening

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