The 8pm show
httpv://youtu.be/_895t_XoJRo
1m24s Get rid of the finger poke on “do your homework”
3m39s Weird non transition into this
3m47s Cut film studies, go straight to the school
4m24s Cut the child militia line
5m55s Should’ve bailed on the joke at this point instead of daring them to hate the joke
Overall: The material that works worked, and the new bit in the middle missed hard. Need to rewrite that. But at least I was able to bring it back.
